The 30 day time-limit is neither overly long nor overly short for all the things you have to do.
This also seems to be the first dating sim I've played where the dialog, gifts and dating all matter.
On the one hand, I certainly can't accuse the writing of being too sparse on details.
Also, the characters are sufficiently different from each other in terms of personalities and "voice", which is important in a dating sim.
Each character has, I think, five gifts that you'll need to purchase for them, and the shop has about eighteen items to choose from.
If you fail, you'll become a dream soul and be trapped here forever.
Review: Writing: I wasn't too sure what score to give this at first.
Buy my Book: d-for-Me-ebook/dp/B00322O OFA The sequel to Kaleidoscope Dating Sim 1, here you play as Soffie, a beautiful girl who ends up in the Dream World. In order to leave the World, she must find a Soul Mate.
The screen turns gray and I have to start all over again. I was really looking forward to seeing the ending of it but seeing as how I tried to play it 4 times after I first had the issue to see that nothing had changed.